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poetryinpieces._'s avatar

Some doors

never open.

Not because

we weren't enough.

Because they were never

meant to become

our home.

The miracle

isn't hearing "yes."

It's waking up

one morning

and no longer

standing outside

knocking.

Veronica πŸ’Œ's avatar

and there’s more:

sometimes,

keeping the key,

closing the door,

remains an act of

love and kindness.

🫢

Vianne Armour's avatar

Feel so much heart, truth and vulnerability in this V 😘 x

Veronica πŸ’Œ's avatar

Thank you, sweet V πŸ«ΆπŸ’•

Antonio Castellaneta's avatar

Sometimes the gentlest words carry the firmest boundaries. I appreciated how this poem holds both tenderness and clarity without becoming cruel. A quiet but powerful piece.

Veronica πŸ’Œ's avatar

That’s an excellent way to put it. The boundary is out of love. πŸ’•

the stranger's avatar

No speaks louder than a storm at times. beautiful :)

Veronica πŸ’Œ's avatar

Oooh, the β€œno” IS the storm. :) 🫢

Mark Johnson's avatar

No is sometimes the best and only answer

Veronica πŸ’Œ's avatar

β€œAmen.” 🀭

sergioflow's avatar

β€” Messir…

she has a key.

β€”

I can see that,

Mortimer.

β€”

Do you think

she wants

to give it to you?

β€”

No.

β€”

Why?

β€”

Someone who intends

to give away a key

does not display it

for so long.

β€”

Then why

does she keep it

in sight?

β€”

To remind us

that the door exists.

β€”

And that it is

still locked?

β€”

No, Mortimer.

That it can only

be opened

from the inside.

Veronica πŸ’Œ's avatar

Oh, this is delightful! Certainly keeping my key in sight. 😁

Duncan The Sage's avatar

What a nice short poem, of concept of love

Veronica πŸ’Œ's avatar

Thank you so much, Duncan 🫢

Duncan The Sage's avatar

You are welcome. Keep up the excellent work

ChocolateBob's avatar

Wasn't THING that disembodied hand on the Adams Family? Sounds creepy but to each his own. I've been known to be creepy myself but in a light hearted good way. Wasn't there an episode where the THING got his middle finger stuck in the air? Not sure. If not then maybe I am thinking with the wrong head tonight. By the way your photo is gorgeous!

Karin Flodstrom's avatar

Wow! Antonio Castellaneta, you said how I felt so much better than I can. Veronica, I loved this.

nina's avatar

Shut the door, V.

Sharp and sweet, as always. β™₯️