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Jeanne Vessantra's avatar

Sometimes, love feels like the sun, casting its light upon our moon-bound days.

ChocolateBob's avatar

To the sun and back ..... 8 minutes each way ... the light of love is fleeting .... I am the energy you see .... I am a photon.

Antonio Castellaneta's avatar

The simplicity of โ€œSo, yesโ€ carries everything that came before itโ€”the hesitation, the fear of not being able to keep someone, and the choice to love anyway. It feels vulnerable without asking for protection.

Ulysses Santillan's avatar

Yes is the word. It carries through the piece. And it hits. Thanks for the read.

poetryinpieces._'s avatar

the purest kind of love isn't saying "you'll stay."

it's saying,

"even if you don't, i'm still grateful my heart found you."